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Old 08-26-2007, 08:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Okay, I am applying for a promotion within my company and am wondering if you could read over my cover letter and give any thoughts. Thank you for your time. Gary.

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This letter is to express my interest in the job posted for the position of Supervisor of Operations in the Great Lakes Region. I have been in the armored car industry since April of 2004 when I got my start as a Vault Teller/Writer with Guardian Armored. I quickly realized that Brinks was all-together a better company to work for and made the transition on February 14, 2005, at which time I started as a Driver and progressed into becoming a Messenger.

Not only am I a self-motivated, team player, but I am also very passionate about working with Brinks and moving up within a company that has a history of success. My job duties while working in the Detroit branch have allowed me to gain an understanding of how a well-organized armored car company should operate.

While working in my current position I have become one of the most proficient employees when it comes to ATM’s as well as customer service. I set out to make customers feel secure, while retaining a professional relationship with them, leaving them with the sense that I am happy and proud to be an employee of Brinks. No matter what issue arises with a customer, I ensure that they have an answer and feel confident in our service by the time I leave a location.

I am consistently looking to learn more and provide the most professional service possible. On occasion I have had the opportunity of assisting the Brinks vault in their time of need as well as performing the duties of Sunday Supervisor at times as well.

I can be reached almost anytime via my cell phone at 313-739-3539. Thank you for your time and considering me for this position. I look forward to speaking with you about this opportunity for advancement.

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What a great letter Gary. I would be impressed! Just removed the last 'as well' on the second to last paragraph and you're laughing!

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Very nice,
Shereeks caught a redundant as well, other than that looks great!
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Thank you, thank you, thank you for giving this a read over for me. I am ready to turn it in to the boss tomorrow.

Thank you again,

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Good luck!!! I hope you get the promotion!

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